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#1 Sep 20 2010 at 6:14 PM Rating: Good
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This will be a long running series. This is great experience for me to, as i am learning animation this year and am excited to grow this into something great!

First episode.

Please comment and let me know if you like, here or on the video.
Its is from open beta, its me ( the cat ) and my boyfriend ( the lala )
Also i am thinking of doing voices...thoughts?
#2 Sep 21 2010 at 12:25 AM Rating: Decent
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Notice: I hope I don't mean to sound rude.

It's alright, it can be improved upon, but if this is your first time doing something like this good job!

Voices would make it much better. If you aren't going to go that route right away I'd say some thought bubbles with different text would enhance it greatly. Also, seeing the emotes being typed is a bit awkward, but I'm not sure how you could fix that other then cutting out the typing part. Which would probably make it strange cutting the scene before every emote.

Good luck with your next video. Smiley: smile
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