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#1 Sep 25 2011 at 10:10 PM Rating: Excellent
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wanting to get some feedback from actual Final Fantasy Players about this design. please let me know what you guys think.

http://elderautumnmoon.deviantart.com/#/d4anfc7

Here is the design on some different colors:
http://elderautumnmoon.deviantart.com/#/d4anf4o

any critique is welcome thanks
#2 Sep 25 2011 at 11:02 PM Rating: Good
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I like it, it's a very cute design.
#3 Sep 25 2011 at 11:09 PM Rating: Decent
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Can I ask what this is for, or nothing in particular?

Context occasionally comes in handy. Smiley: wink

From a graphic design standpoint, my initial critique is that the lines on the left don't match up and it's really bothering me. That is the lines the three lines of text draw on their left, they may all be matched up, but the eye almost wants the black font to be lined up with the black background of the word Racing.

This problem is probably compounded due to the variation in the sizes of the text, I would consider moving them so that the line the side of the C and L draw lines up with the black background, try matching the font sizes, or moving the word league over so that the right of the word is almost at the tip of the feather. Or a combination of these things.
#4 Sep 26 2011 at 5:00 AM Rating: Good
Sephrick wrote:
I like it, it's a very cute design.
I have to agree. I don't know what it is for, but it looks good.
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#5 Sep 26 2011 at 7:58 AM Rating: Good
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I like it: subtle and effective. The only problem I have is the chocobo's wings, which I think look like bat/dragon wings perhaps a little too much; aren't chocobos' wings generally smaller than that? Anyway, it's a small gripe, really.
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#6 Sep 26 2011 at 8:54 AM Rating: Good
Overall I like the design.... a few things to address if your a perfectionist.

The design itself is really good with bold colors but the T-shirt colors chosen as the background really fight with the design. The Green and Yellow work as they are a bit more muted and allow the logo design to be front and center for viewers attention. The Red and Blue though are so bold that it detracts from the design. If having Red and Blue tshirts is important then consider using darker shades of both Red and Blue.

As a Prior poster stated the 3 lines of text don't quite work together. You might want to add a unifying feature like open boxes around the top and bottom lines of text..... or something similar to tie the text together rather than it is right now with the text appearing to be disjointed and seperate from the other lines.

Other than that its a good design :)
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